Janet: There's something that doesn't feel quite right about the last page. The voice changes. It's too adult.
Dorothy: Remember what Larry David said: "No lessons, no hugs!"
Tuesday, June 24, 2008
Good Advice
Isn't it a relief to have friends who will respond with some honesty to your work? Janet, Dorothy and I get together once every few months to have show & tell. We also drink champagne and eat huge platters of food. Here we are today at Janet's.
Janet: There's something that doesn't feel quite right about the last page. The voice changes. It's too adult.
Dorothy: Remember what Larry David said: "No lessons, no hugs!"
Janet: There's something that doesn't feel quite right about the last page. The voice changes. It's too adult.
Dorothy: Remember what Larry David said: "No lessons, no hugs!"
